Short Story
I opened my eyes slowly, sunshine streaming through the
windows, unrestrained and unwanted. I groaned, while the blanket floated off me
and folded nicely on the end of the bed. I laid there refusing to move. I
listened to the sound of timid maids scurrying around and the muffled sounds of
dishes clinking downstairs. I finally
sat up and allowed my clothes to dress me. As they did, I stared around the
palace watching idiots grovel at my mother’s feet, not knowing that she
couldn’t see them anyway. Once dressed, I sat in my chair and floated out the
window. I yawned as the chair moved like a turtle towards the other tower, and
willed it to move faster. I stepped through the window sill and went to my
mother’s side.
“Please wake up mother,” I said, “Morning isn’t the same
without you.”
My mother lay silently, her eyes wide and glassy. I pulled her once lustrous red hair off of
the fluffy pillow and set a brush to work on it. I studied her small frame and
again started to feel hopeless. She had been like this for too long. I was the
only one with access to her room, and therefore the only one to take care of
her. I was also the only one left to make the sun rise.
Wow, that was amazing. I'm not sure what to think about it right now but I'm sure that as soon as I have time to process it will become clear. That was brilliant. I loved the emotion and the little glimpses in tho the life of the character. One thing I was a little confused about wast the last line about the sun. It left me wondering if this was supposed to be a fantasy work or if it was a figure of speech. Aside from that is was a really inspiring work of art. Thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeleteI love the way you described how she got ready for the day. It made it also seem like a dream and it caught my attention and kept me reading.
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